Sunday, 17 April 2011

Early Birds

This morning, I woke early. The birds were deep in conversation, perched on the leafless tree outside my bedroom window. The sky gently roared with a far-off flight.

It was the kind of early which I usually observe as being late. With insomnia, if I'm lucky, I rarely get to sleep before 5am. This morning I found myself surprised, confused, to be waking up the other side of it and without prompting, no less. It felt as if I'd opened someone else's mail without reading the name first. It's all too easily done, absent-mindedly, but once you realise, it feels a bit wrong.

The distant sun, hiding beneath the horizon, washed the sky with lilacs. There was an eerie stillness in that explicit moment - strange and serene - the realisation that no one in the houses around you could possibly be awake. And if they were awake, were they too padding around the kitchen floor barefoot, treading lightly on learned floorboards that did not creak, wishing the sound of the kettle boiling did not seem so loud?

Curtains open, the room flooded with a pastel light. The day was young and the air fresh to my stale lungs. I'd never seen so much potential in a cloudless sky, or a sun that broke orange through the trees at garden's end. I felt boundless and sprightly, as if my feet had springs.

As strange as it sounds, I was handed a gift. Of time. Though I lost more hours through sleep, they were given back. Hours usually spent bemoaning my lack of sleep - my grumpiness, the bruise-like tinge under my blood-shot eyes - these hours have been returned. The mindless thoughts are gone and in their place is the freedom to think as I please. I almost don't quite know what to do with myself. My limbs are alien and these can't possibly be my hands.

And so, as I embark on a day filled with possibilities, with a mind sharp and clear for the first time in months, I wonder. To go to bed as the sky turns black, sleep the night through and wake before the sun; is this what it feels like to be normal?

I wonder...


  1. I really enjoyed your entry, especially this simile: "It felt as if I'd opened someone else's mail without reading the name first. It's all too easily done, absent-mindedly, but once you realise, it feels a bit wrong."

  2. I hope today begins the same as yesterday. Are the birds speaking to you again? Is the clarity still there? Then, start editing!

  3. Too bad we 'normal' people don't see what you see and don't feel what you feel--anymore. It pays to be out of the norm, sometimes.

  4. I really enjoyed this. SOme great imagery too, especially the 'pastel light'

  5. This is a really lovely post, you bring out your feelings so vividly.

  6. very well written!

  7. That's really nice, seeing the everyday in a newer light. :-)
    Hope you are better

  8. Hi Lou.

    Haven't checked in on your blog for awhile, you're still you, imagine that! Anyway, nice piece. I enjoyed it. Thank you.


  9. Thanks for all the comments dearest readers!

    Bruce: Yes, full of clarity at the moment. The consequence of this is quite a brutal edit of my novel. I am a few thousand words down now. But onwards and upwards. I'm actually quite enjoying the editing process now!

    Bobby: I remember you! Thanks for stopping by. I shall find your blog now. I know you moved to wordpress so it might take me a while. Great to hear from you. :)


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